you make no mention of your methods or medium. I can't really critique it at all. is it a photomanipulation, a purely self shot/digitally made graphic, or what? I can't tell.
as for the work it's self. some parts where the white comes though expecially around the line of the hat looks very unfinished. and alot of it looks simply copy, pasted with photoshop into a quick little poster. theres nothing really bad about it, but nothing great.
Medium: Mostly Adobe Illustrator with some use of Photoshop to cut out the mask and ribbon. The mask and ribbon are from stock photos with necessary color adjustments in photoshop.
I realize that there's a few glitches in the poster but those slipped through since I was on a time restraint to get it done. The white around the head is actually a glow effect I added after the cutting and pasting and looks a lot better on the actuall poster than on a computer screen. Also I wasn't aiming for great artwork, rather an eye-catching poster that gets the message of the event across.
Thanks for the feedback greatly appreciated.
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well I seems like you did it fast. but yeah. for a poster to a ball, it's pretty much the best one I've ever seen. it's a great way of getting that across (that it is a masked ball)
you should leave more detailed comments, it's annoying I know to have to, but it helps people understand your pov, and what your going for and how you made it (I actually don't do a great job at it myself, I guess I will from now on)
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as for the work it's self. some parts where the white comes though expecially around the line of the hat looks very unfinished. and alot of it looks simply copy, pasted with photoshop into a quick little poster. theres nothing really bad about it, but nothing great.
I realize that there's a few glitches in the poster but those slipped through since I was on a time restraint to get it done. The white around the head is actually a glow effect I added after the cutting and pasting and looks a lot better on the actuall poster than on a computer screen. Also I wasn't aiming for great artwork, rather an eye-catching poster that gets the message of the event across.
Thanks for the feedback
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you should leave more detailed comments, it's annoying I know to have to, but it helps people understand your pov, and what your going for and how you made it (I actually don't do a great job at it myself, I guess I will from now on)
gald you like the feedback.
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